Forum: Member Stories

Here's a fictionalized version of today's(?) headlines. Flavius Aetius <b>Note from Dennis - Libertarian has started a commentary thread in the Member's Stories forum if anyone wants to comment on the story thus far. <I>Commentary thread:</I> ...

E&E Chapter One I didn’t have any love for any of the Laws who guarded the Prison. I was locked away without just cause and they were the ones who stood between me and Freedom.

This is my most recent story. I worked more on character development and tried to improve with less use of exposition. It's about 120,000 words, IIRC. Hope you can see some improvement. Again, the characters are dealing with the economic challenges I think could come upon us at any time. ...

Please feel free to say whatever you want to about this story.

Fire From the Sky, the first book in my new PAW series, went on sale yesterday. I have had numerous requests that I get 'back' to PAW somewhere along the line, and so I have. This was a project I worked on for about two years off and on, making no telling how many changes along the way. Unlike...

I looked and didn't see that I'd ever posted this story here on TB2K. Lots of talk of pandemics again and I thought this one might be useful as far as planning goes. This was written back when people were just starting to worry about a Swine Flu pandemic. It was also written with a lot of input...

Please post all comments for North to Alaska here. Thanks, Fleataxi

This is the third tale I wrote, trying to improve my character development. Those who prepare for the future will at some point have to figure out how to deal with those who do not prepare, especially family. TOLD YA SO Chapter 1 Traffic on the interstate was about normal for a...

Y'all know the drill, please place comments here, and have a some sweet tea! ...................\~/]

OH NO!!! He's at it again!!! They say that poets who read their own works in public usually have other bad habits as well. Well, I'm giving writing another shot. Now, I'm a hunt and peck typist. Which means this story (which at this point remains untitled) is a work in progress. Please bare with...

Attn. TBers, and especially Mods. No doubt some of you have seen this posted on a site that can not be mentioned. THIS IS NOT A CUT AND PASTE ITEM. I am the author of this story. I have already spoken with Dennis on this matter. He has assured me that since I am the author, all rights to the story...

Hate to be self absorbed with this post, but the people that seemed to post their comments have stopped. I have a couple of questions for those that have suffered thu the torture of the first few chapters. First, as I have not written for decades, is it becoming more readable as I progress?....

To be clear the following is not a new story. It is in fact a part of a thread that SqrlGrl started on the EZBoard incarnation of TB2K back in February of 2001 titled <i>An Exercise in Preparedness</i> which dealt with nuclear warfare survival. That thread ran concurrently with Taz's (she went by...

Comments are always greatly appreciated especially at the Beginning Attack of the Johnnies Chapter One

How did it happen? Russell didn't understand. It made no sense. America was the most powerful nation on earth, once. It was the virtual bread basket of the world. It was the great bastion of freedom and opportunity for all people. At least it was. It wasn't any of those things now. So what...

Here's the website: THE REVELATION Only the Prologue and 5 Chapters written so far -- I'm posting each chapter as I write it. The aesthetics of the website make it a bit hard to read with the white font on black screen. If you go over to the right-hand column, you'll find a link to the PDFs...

Put them here, if you would.

Haven't done any writing in a while, and I know I have a bad habit of not following up. But this time I'm really going to try to keep going. Really :D Prologue I didn’t mean to cause the end of the world. Honestly I didn’t. Now I truly understand the phrase about the road to Hell...

Where is Andrea?

. - The Cargoman's Tale - A bee crawled in aimless circles around my window glass, deceived by the light it saw as freedom - the light that kept it trapped. I moved slowly, quietly, trying to get it cupped and out the door before my mother saw it. My hands hovered over it, the way I had...

SShe is not a member here, but for all of us who read Patriot Fiction and then got kicked out of the squirrel tree: http://carryondamaris.blogspot.com/2011/06/chapter-one.html 11 Chapters posted as of tonight. For the blog of all of her stories:...

Thank you. But may I ask that all further comments be placed on this thread?

DAY 1 - ROUND 1 - APRIL 27, 2011 On Wednesday morning April 27, 2011, unknowingly my life as I knew it was about to be drastically changed - I kept a diary of some of the events that took place - as preppers, I thought you all might find it interesting reading about the day-to-day events and...

My pleasure, but as before please post comments on this seperate thread

introduction of sorts... :shr: This is a project that I have been working on for over a year now. I have had a long battle with it. It started out to be destined for here at member stories or another free that hosts a more explicit type of content, as I didn’t really know about the rules at...

Alone by Fastback65 Chapter 1 Lying on the bed of pine straw, watching the morning sun work it's way up through the tangle of limbs on it's journey to the top of the sky, Lyle tried to remember the last time he had seen another human being. He thought it had to have been at least a...

PLEASE post any comments for The Big One II here! I know a lot of people are reading, but very few are commenting - All comments appreciated! I need your feedback to make the story and my writing better! Thanks for reading the story! Fleataxi

Mods if it is not ok to post this here, please remove. I just wanted to tell the readers here about a book I picked up today. It is titled Last Light by Terri Blackstock. People are enjoying their daily routine when the power goes out, phones don't work, no water , planes crash, etc. The...

Chapter One Steve looked back over the past few months in his mind, while he continued to stay in his hiding spot, praying silently that he wouldn't be found. If he could only stay out of sight for a couple of hours, his chances of escaping would be greatly improved as night fell. He let his...

Beneath a line of mercury lights, a black sedan crawled along with the rest of the turnpike traffic, its polished surface reflecting the wet asphalt like some moving urban mirage. Rain dotted and streaked its darkened windows, hiding all but the faintest silhouette of the middle-aged man behind the...

Chapter 1 As he leaned back against the clump of maples next to the fire, Tim reflected upon how life was destined to do only one thing. Change. For, in fact, this would probably be the last open fire he would be able to enjoy in his lifetime. So sad he thought, recollecting all the...

I wish you had started one. Well, here it is.

Il Agita di Amore is at http://www.timebomb2000.com/vb/showthread.php?389191-Il-Agita-di-Amore I've been promising to get up something original to support TB2K and this is it. Let me know if it is worth continuing or if no one is interested. Constructive critiques are welcome as always. ...

Hiya does anyone remember the story the troublemaker, i was thinking about all the stories i have read over the years both here and at Frugal squirrel forum. I got to thinking about the troublemaker and i remember it was a excellant story and i was wondering if it ever got finished and if anyone...

Hi all! It has been a loonnnggg time since I last posted on TB2K. While much has changed, one positive item, for me at least, is I have gone back to writing fiction again. I posted a few short stories on "the other place" but up until recently, had not posted anywhere else with the exception of...