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Hi all, I just finished reading this story by CanadaSue. I have to say that it was gripping. I think it is one of the best teaching stories I have read. It is very comprehensive. For those who haven't read it, it is told in the form of a journal. It was written in 2002. Also, it's only fair that...

The great plague had ended and stillness had descended upon the land. The Suburban Home She was alone now. They had all left. Some were silent as able arms carried them out while others walked away on their own always coughing in various degrees. She at times cried and kept forever...

CFI has a nice story going, this thread (hopefully its appropriate) can be used for comments, so the story stays clean. Looks like a good start, Chap

AUTHOR'S NOTE AND WARNING: This story may not be suitable for minors, especially young minors. Story contains scenes of graphic violence. These were necessary for the story, and are NOT gratuitous. Please use your own judgement before allowing young minors to read this story. NOTE: This...

The rules are simple; make us laugh with rythming verse. Go!

a work in progress :) your comments, suggestions and critique of writing and the info and actualy, any aspect of the story would be appreciated on the Comments for Some Days thread Some Days Aren’t So Bad By LMonty911 Copy write reserved to author

Please post all comments to The Reluctant Survivalist here. Author's Note: This is a work of fiction. While based on real people, the events are the figments of the Author's wild imagination. The Author does not condone any illegal activities. Also please note that while the main...

A part biographical/part fiction about how our current dog came to live with and be a part of our family. It’s the first fictional writing that I’ve attempted in nearly 25 years, so constructive comments which would help me improve my writing would be appreciated.

Please post all comments for The Vigilante here. Thanks, Fleataxi

About our Saturday trip East. It started early Saturday morning when the phone rang. I was sleeping next to my wife, and the phone was ringing away. I waited for her to move, but she just laid there. I thought she must want me to get it, so I picked up my head and looked at the clock. Through...

all help, suggestions, corrections and ideas would be appreciated.

Author's Note: The following story is Fiction and loosely based on Revelation. Any deviation from Scripture is my fault. Route 666 by Fleataxi Chapter 1 Paul and Nancy Connors lived in the City of Orange, CA. Their two daughters, Elizabeth and Anne, went to the local schools and...

This is from another website that is similiar to Timebomb. I've been lurking there for several years when I came across this one member's story. I think some here will enjoy the struggles that this young couple went through to build not only their home, but a successful marriage as well. ...

Give Me Liberty... by Stephen Moore All Rights Reserved. ----- Prologue

The story thread already being so big I'd like to keep from cluttering it up but I'm in somewhat of a quandary about a particular phase of the story. For you folks that have been reading it maybe you'd share some thoughts with me and I'll craft something out of them or maybe they'll give me an...

Hi to all the writers who have posted stories here. I simply want to thank all of you for sharing your talents with all of us. It is really sincerely appreciated! :) :)Thank you. hummer

I just read Christian For Israel's story "Mountain Home." I felt it was excellent and hope that other's might use this thread to nominate other member's stories. So far, I highly recommend "Mountain Home." Rage

First, let me say that I find the stories to be very good. My only gripe is when an author gets bogged down in inconsequential details: "He took his .34567 Super-Dooper pistol with its gold-plated handle, 300x Wilson sniper-scope, and Hush-Boy Rad-15 silencer, and got into his 1892 Chevy...

Hi guys. I've written a few short stories, and am skittish about posting them here, as I think the language may be a bit over the top in this forum (I always did have a pottymouth). I'm posting links to my stories, but I'd also encourage the writers here to sign up. The site is called East of...

Hi guys, I'm posting this here for critiques for any who are inclined to give them. It contains some adult language and disturbing content (at least, I hope it's disturbing - if not, we have a problem). You have been warned. If the mods feel it's not appropriate for the board, I'll not be...

We should’ve took the north fork. I told Braden it was easier riding. Better grass for the horses, flatter land. But no, it was his goddamn way, or no way. So here we are. They’re peeling Braden’s scalp off his skull, so I don’t guess I’ll get the chance to tell him “I told you...

Sue…evening, March 08/03…What a chapter! Loved it and teared up w/ the ..........! You are doing a great job and just want to let you know that it’s appreciated. Thanks! edited because I didn't want to give away part of story...read it and you'll know what part. LOL

I posted 3 more chapters and hope to get a couple more on tomorrow

Sergeant Frank Bonacci went up the steps onto the porch and walked into the living room. "This one they'll have to change the name to the dead room" Frank thought to himself. Hustle and bustle went the Crime Lab people. Flash flash went the camera as every angle of the body and the immediate...

The North Star (unsanitized) Flying paper, a remembered ticker tape parade. Exploding fireball. Surreal. Unreal. A movie reel. Get out. Go north. Away. (They said to stay!) I left, thirsty, trying to communicate. No connection. It was no accident.

Wind Dancers Sandy-bellies the Indians called them. Tramp sailors of the ancient seas, twin youngsters trip, trip, tripping close upon mamas heels. Clown-faced hobos race away on slender limbs, turn and face: furred Coy-o-te, trickster, eternal predator of the eternal herd.

The Big One A Short Story by Fleataxi Chapter 1 Bret Wilson lived near Crystal Spring, Northwest of Mount Wilson in the Angeles National Forrest. He grew up in Glendale, graduated from Glendale High, married his high school sweetheart Maggie, who continued to work as a model for the...

This is just a small excerpt, posted to allow those who will be immediately put off, by the initial non christian conformity, evident in the beginning of the chapter. However this is part of the design and important to the storyline. I didn't like this myself, however, in my determined way, I...

WHAT IT MEANS TO MISS NEW ORLEANS In Memory of John Kennedy Toole and His New Orleans Saturday, before sunrise, I pulled into Mom’s driveway and bumped the horn twice. A yellow porch light cut on over the front door of her patio home. She wasn’t ready. Mom had agreed to leave...

A.T. Hagan's prose on the main board inspired me to commit to text a story idea I had pop into my head last week. This story is Copyright © 2002-2005 by me, and I reserve all rights to this work. (Might wanna see if someone would want to publish the completed version later.) I'll add...

I woke up. Or did I dream I woke up? So am I in a dream of waking up or did I wake up from dreaming about waking up? I tried pinching myself.........and it hurt! As I look around everything seems normal,the bed,windows,the usual. But hey, why shouldnt I see this in a dream? Or even feel the...

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As many of you know I am a practicing Registered Nurse, now in emergency medicine and previously on a medical floor which had many hospice (end of life) patients. To me death is neither unfamiliar, nor something to be feared, but a natural part of the life process. If we are lucky, it is quick or...

Alan..a bit off topic but I was digging thru some stuff I'd saved to HDD from the old EZboard TB incarnation and found 26 chapters of Forever After you'd written in the Purple Prose section in early 2001. The PP section's long gone from EZ BTW. Was there more? Did you stash a copy somewhere?

I scanned through that thread about what's allowed on the front page and decided, after scanning the sigs, that this was the best place for this bit of humor. Sometimes, it's just possible that other folks can get a much needed belly laugh out of some 'homegrown' and fairly colorful family history...

Well, here’s the start of a story that I hope that you will like. I’ll be slow to post chapters, maybe one every couple of months after Chapter 1, due to not having a internet connection and schooling. Please note; This is not a racist story! It isn’t a turner dairies or something for...