This is...or...should be...a short story series. (Although SwingZone was too when I started it.)
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This is...or...should be...a short story series. (Although SwingZone was too when I started it.)
Seriously?!? You're just gonna leave us hanging with that?!? You are CRUEL!!!!!
BTW looks good so far!!! :)
yay! new story!!!! darn! new story! I'm hooked...
yay a new Kritter story!!!! :popcorn1::popcorn1::popcorn1:
*turns, looks back at Cole.. waves sadly g'bye* :hdbng: Life goes on...
Wooot! moAr Please :)
Yippee, I haven't been here in a few days and was just coming tonight to beg Kritter to write something else. What a wonderful surprise! Thanks Kritter.
Great beginning!
Thank you for the new story, it sounds very, very interesting.
More Kritter, more. With your wonderful imagination and talent, I'm hoping this won't be a short story. Also that sounds like the kind of laser I wouldn't mind getting zapped with.
Very nice start! Sure hope you add more - a lot more - to this story!
I have a third chapter for this but it ends there. Was waiting to see if I came up with anything that might make this more of a story, but I'm at a loss on this one. I even tried brainstorming it out with my son, but his suggestion that I give her super powers and turn her into a sexy crime fighting latina (seriously) unfortunately didn't do much for me. Although, now that I write that out, it's funny as hell. :P
wasn't there to be at least one more chapter??? what happened???